I tried to read that but I get hung up on bots and algorithms etc. My question is this. I try to make readable and relatable descriptions, but they don't seem to work. I get also super confused on keywords. Are you supposed to have 1 word at a time like fun, cartoon, and slogan, that you can mix with your other keywords to create fun slogan cartoon avocado shirt, or is fun slogan cartoon avocado shirt supposed to be the keyword? I can never figure out what I do wrong. Here is an example of one not seen in ages. I've been trying to improve keywords but don't know what's working or not.
1234 Thumb War! (Large Tote Bag added by Z)
One two three four get your helmet ready its time to declare war. Thumb war. It’s way more fun than getting an Indian burn and easier than arm wrestling so go to war for awesome fashion and get this cool design today!
Keywords: thumbwar, declare,war, thumb, kids, childrens, game, childhood, wrestling, one
It's an older design where I thought tags were supposed to be short so customers could string them together. I also thought you were not supposed to add tote to keywords.
Anyway this is just an example but I would like to know how it's wrong.