Product Design Critique 4 pages: 1 2 3 [4]
Posted: Sunday, May 05, 2019 6:41:43 PM
PacifierCity wrote:
Shelli Fitzpatrick wrote:
PacifierCity wrote:
I always appreciate feedback.



Description:

Here we have a cute pacifier designed specifically for a baby whose father fights fires. It features cute child like text which reads "My Daddy's a Firefighter." The text surrounds the classic fire department logo in red and black. Turn your little ones siren off with this soother. #firefighting #pacifier #binky #soother #fireman #firedepartment | cute baby pacifiers | gifts for firefighters | baby shower gifts | dads who fight fires | family of fire fighters


Tags:

firefighter, fire, fighter, baby shower gifts, cute pacifiers, infant gifts, new father. soother, baby gear, binky


Suggestions??

Thanks

Smile


you have done a good job with this, the only suggestion I have is if you could add a tag like "daddy's a firefighter" or "firefigher daddy" and "fireman dad" If it were mine I would eliminate the tags "fire" and "fighter" and replace them with one of these to give weight to the fireman daddy theme.

I might also add the colors in a tag by modifying "binky" to "red and white binky"

That is all I have right now. hth


Thanks Shelli,

I think I will adjust a ew of those tags.

Smile Josh


You're welcome! Smile
Posted: Sunday, May 05, 2019 9:54:34 PM


You Had me at Meow!

Any cat is able to sense that they are meant to be in your life the moment they meet you. And from the moment you hear them give their first meow or purr in your direction, you know it's love. | © and ® JHumlie - All Rights Reserved.

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Posted: Monday, May 06, 2019 6:06:23 AM
Jaana Humlie wrote:


You Had me at Meow!

Any cat is able to sense that they are meant to be in your life the moment they meet you. And from the moment you hear them give their first meow or purr in your direction, you know it's love. | © and ® JHumlie - All Rights Reserved.

you-had-me-at-meow, meow, cat, cat-saying, feline-pun, cute-saying, animal-love, cat-gift-idea, cat-pun, moggie

Other possible tags: happy feline, smiling cat
Posted: Monday, May 06, 2019 10:50:43 AM
somethingartish wrote:
Jaana Humlie wrote:


You Had me at Meow!

Any cat is able to sense that they are meant to be in your life the moment they meet you. And from the moment you hear them give their first meow or purr in your direction, you know it's love. | © and ® JHumlie - All Rights Reserved.

you-had-me-at-meow, meow, cat, cat-saying, feline-pun, cute-saying, animal-love, cat-gift-idea, cat-pun, moggie

Other possible tags: happy feline, smiling cat


I would add that instead of repeating cat so many times maybe add other variations like "Kitty" "Kitteh" "Kitty-cat" and "Pet" if you could work those into your tags somehow it would widen your chances at being searchable.

Smile

Adding: The design itself is very cute and will look great on many different background colors.
Posted: Monday, May 06, 2019 9:46:15 PM


Angel of Friendship

This angel is from a group of art images I've made with some of the angel designs in my collection. This one depicts an angel flying through the air, as two white birds fly into her hands. |© and ® JHumlie - All Rights Reserved

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Posted: Tuesday, May 07, 2019 7:46:42 AM
Jaana Humlie wrote:


Angel of Friendship

This angel is from a group of art images I've made with some of the angel designs in my collection. This one depicts an angel flying through the air, as two white birds fly into her hands. |© and ® JHumlie - All Rights Reserved

wings,angel-hosts,holy-messenger,angel,inspirational,angel-of-friendship,friendship

One of the hardest things to do as an artist is to step outside our own interpretation of a work's meaning, to see it through the eyes of a buyer.

With friendship being an abstract concept, I'm not sure buyers looking at this image for the first time will immediately make the connection to this being an "angel of friendship", or that it's likely to be one of their search terms. So I might shift it a bit, something like this:

Doves Befriending Gold-winged Dark-haired Angel

(I would say doves rather than white birds, due to the importance of doves in religious symbolism.)

Here's an idea for a description: A peaceful scene in which a pair of white doves fly to meet a dark-haired angel with golden wings near a white, puffy cloud, as she drifts through the heavens; a symbol of friendship. The angel wears a multicolored robe in shades of orange, dark pink, and dark blue with a long pink ribbon tied around her waist, whose ends float freely in the air before her. A halo can be seen behind her head. All appear against a sky blue background.

Possible keywords: dark-haired angel, golden wings, white dove pair, puffy white cloud, beautiful multicolored robe, blue sky background, friendship, religious symbolism, peaceful scene, inspirational holy messenger

You may of course come up with something that suits you better - these are just suggestions to get you thinking more broadly about how a customer might perceive and search for this type of product offering.
Posted: Tuesday, May 07, 2019 9:22:00 AM
Fuzzy Felosarix wrote:
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Here's an idea for a description: A peaceful scene in which a pair of white doves fly to meet a dark-haired angel with golden wings near a white, puffy cloud, as she drifts through the heavens; a symbol of friendship. The angel wears a multicolored robe in shades of orange, dark pink, and dark blue with a long pink ribbon tied around her waist, whose ends float freely in the air before her. A halo can be seen behind her head. All appear against a sky blue background.

Possible keywords: dark-haired angel, golden wings, white dove pair, puffy white cloud, beautiful multicolored robe, blue sky background, friendship, religious symbolism, peaceful scene, inspirational holy messenger



Can I pay you to write descriptions and tags for me... lol.

I'm going to check out your store for inspiration.
Posted: Tuesday, May 07, 2019 10:13:42 AM
Josh B wrote:
Can I pay you to write descriptions and tags for me... lol.

I'm going to check out your store for inspiration.

I probably still have some real clunkers that I should fix. The thing to remember about descriptions is this: They're used by machine algorithms to match your product page to the terms searched on by someone using an external search engine. Same for your titles. So descriptions need to be detailed, and titles need to have your most important keywords in them. But both still have to be intelligible to humans reading them.

Tags are for Zazzle's search algorithms. Debatable whether they're worth much or anything outside Zazzle.
Posted: Tuesday, May 07, 2019 10:50:39 PM


Carnations

This design features a pair of pink carnations and one carnation just getting ready to bloom. The bright color of the flowers are contrasted by the greenish-gray stem and leaves. This design is perfect for Mothers Day, Valentines Day, or just anytime you want to give something special to someone you love.

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Posted: Wednesday, May 08, 2019 9:22:38 AM
Jaana Humlie wrote:


Carnations

This design features a pair of pink carnations and one carnation just getting ready to bloom. The bright color of the flowers are contrasted by the greenish-gray stem and leaves. This design is perfect for Mothers Day, Valentines Day, or just anytime you want to give something special to someone you love.

carnations,stem,flowers,leaves,green,pink,mothers-day,valentines-day,pink-blooms







To me the cool pink background clashes a tat with the pink and red of the carnation so I picked the color from the carnation and with my color picker and tried to blend over to white, but the pink still felt to cool, so I blended to cream instead of white

#f56681
#ffffff
#ffffce

And chose #fbccb4

I'm vaguely familiar with carnations from their political to their victorian symbolism, but don't have a special attachment myself, so I went to google to help me out. The image reminded me of botanical studies. So I looked up the botanical name and placed in underneath to emphasize the connection.

However even if you don't like my choices to improve on the design. After all it is a matter of personal preferences, I suppose.

What you can improve on, is adding the botanical name and the word / phrase "botanic / botanical studies" to reach out to those who take botanic and flora a little more serious than I do.

Because the color may just as well be called red and red carnations have a high symbolic value, I also suggest you include the keyphrase "red carnation"

As to the symbolism of the flower, google summarizes it as follow:

Quote:
Meaning & Symbolism of Carnations. ... White carnations suggest pure love and good luck, light red symbolizes admiration, while dark red represents deep love and affection.


And here is a website to draw inspiration for a more elaborate description to a very faceted flower:
https://www.auntyflo.com/flower-dictionary/red-carnation

Keyphrases to expand the reach: Victorian, admiration, Expression of gratitude, fortitude and bravery (Slovenian Soldier wear them with pride), ruffled petals, botanical name: Greek dios and anthos, so the botanical name translates to "flower of the gods".
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Posted: Wednesday, May 08, 2019 11:00:44 AM
tagwise I would drop the tag "stem" and add "floral design"

I agree about the two shades of pink not matching real well and I might put it on a pale yellow or sage green background if it were my design.

example:





Posted: Thursday, May 09, 2019 10:56:32 PM
It's never too early to start putting up holiday designs.



Polar Bear Holiday Party

A cute illustrated image of a group of Polar Bears having a holiday celebration along with some penguins. Perfect for the Christmas holiday season.

polar-bears,holiday-celebrations,christmas,christmas-party,penguins,holiday-scene
Posted: Saturday, May 11, 2019 8:27:28 PM
I think this background looks okay, but it's always good to have a second opinion. So if it doesn't work or the background is too distracting it doesn't work or needs something to dampen the background color.



Any cat is able to sense that they are meant to be in your life the moment they meet you. And from the moment you hear them give their first meow or purr in your direction, you know it's love. | © and ® JHumlie - All Rights Reserved.

you-had-me-at-meow,meow,happy-kitty,kitty-cat-saying,feline-pun,cute-saying,animal-love,cat-gift-idea,pet-pun,moggie

I do have a couple of filter designs that can be used to dampen the background. The first is a white filter which dulls the color, and the second one is a vignette filter which grays out much of the background design.

This is how it looks with the white filter.



And this is the same design with the Vignette Filter



Posted: Tuesday, May 14, 2019 9:11:21 PM


Bengal Tiger

Vignette of a Bengal Tiger looking over its shoulder and snarling.| © and ® JHumlie - All Rights Reserved.

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Posted: Monday, May 20, 2019 7:09:49 PM


River Land

Digital art design of a stained glass styled scene of a valley with a river flowing through it. | © and ® JHumlie - All Rights Reserved.

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Posted: Thursday, May 23, 2019 9:56:47 PM


Adorable Cat Illustration

Adorable illustration of a cat laying on it's back.| © and ® JHumlie - All Rights Reserved.

cats,pets,adorable-image,cat-image,drawing,happy-meow
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